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My meditation takes me deep.
I sense myself leaving my
earthbound body behind.
The causal body separates
and melts into the
universe splintering
into each pulsing particle
that makes up infinity.
I become bright light
and the spinning vortex
of Source welcomes
me home.
Join us over at dVerse where Grace invites us to write a Quadrille using the word “melt.”
Anna
/ March 21, 2016Thank you for your unique take on the prompt. Meditation is much needed in my life as the semester comes to a close!
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whimsygizmo
/ March 21, 2016I love the thought of just melting into the universe. Beautiful.
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kanzensakura
/ March 21, 2016Melting into the universe, becoming light…..wonderful! I feel similarly in my meditation as I go through my sword forms and become one with the falling leaf, or smell of grass, or drops of rain. Just wonderful Gayle….I so much like this.
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Grace
/ March 21, 2016That’s a deep spiritual meditation Gayle ~ Love the welcoming Hands to Home ~
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Walt Wojtanik
/ March 21, 2016Ethereal and infinite! This is gorgeous, Gayle.
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The Literary Doc
/ March 21, 2016What a great idea you have… melting into inspiration, and merging with a higher self. Interesting take on the prompt.
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Candy
/ March 21, 2016a beautiful meditation
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kim881
/ March 22, 2016Yes, I remember that feeling. Wonderful take on the prompt.
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
/ March 22, 2016This is a wonderful feeling… love the sense of melting with the universe.
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writersdream9
/ March 22, 2016True freedom! I love this!
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Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade)
/ March 22, 2016Well said.
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Bryan Ens
/ March 22, 2016Naidoo piece. Very soothing.
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Glenn Buttkus
/ March 22, 2016I have always tried too hard with meditation, can never fully still the busy voices that echo within every corridor of me; yet the spiritual peace that comes from being an old soul, from grasping & coveting finite pieces of truth in the cosmic puzzle is exhilarating, as is your poem.
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Margaret Elizabeth Bednar
/ March 22, 2016poetry is about as close as I get to meditation – that and horseback riding in the woods…
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petrujviljoen
/ March 22, 2016I haven’t been meditating for a while now and truly miss it, because of this. Thanks for the reminder to return.
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Misky
/ March 23, 2016This is exquisite, Gayle. Yo have captured the essence of peace in this poem.
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silentlyheardonce
/ March 23, 2016An exhilarating feeling.
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Sreesha Diva
/ March 24, 2016What a unique take on the prompt! Very spiritual and moving!
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Anonymous
/ March 25, 2016Strong picture. Wish I could meditate that well.
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katiemiafrederick
/ April 4, 2016Oh.. Center Balance..
a star’s true liGht now..
You SinG a SonG
so warm
and true
yoUr arms
oF bliSs
are
mine
iN mind
and body
balance.. i Dance..
i SinG yoUr SonG..:)
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Britt Blooms
/ August 17, 2016Very beautifully written
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Bodhirose
/ August 17, 2016Thanks very much…I appreciate that.
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