There once was a woman named Pearl
Who loved her hair wavy with curls
But the minute she hit the steamy street,
Her hair fell flat like her feet
Then she pouted and cried like a girl!
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My entry for The Purple Treehouse Poetic Forms Week Three– Limerick : http://purpletreehouse.blogspot.com/2011/09/poetic-forms-wk-3-limerick-sept-21.html
Morning
/ September 30, 2011well done.
😉
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Bodhirose
/ September 30, 2011Thanks a bunch!
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Inside the Mind of Isadora
/ September 30, 2011This is terriffic , Gayle. You have a knack for so many peotic styles.
I have been working on mine and only have three lines. I have been stuck on getting the flow.
Nice done,
Izzy xoxo
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Bodhirose
/ September 30, 2011Thanks a lot, Izzy. Actually, I wasn’t too happy with line three–it kind of trips over itself a bit! Oh, well…
Will this be your first limerick then? It’s harder than it seems isn’t it. There’s a certain rhythm and rhyme to them–it’s quite an art to get them right.
Hugs,
Gayle xoxo
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Inside the Mind of Isadora
/ October 3, 2011Oh yes … it would have been my first. I am way too stuck to get it, perhaps, in the future. For now, I will enjoy the ones others write.
Good job ..
Izzy xoxo
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lesliepaints
/ September 30, 2011Thank you for the morning chuckle, Gayle! I remember I liked the last one you wrote like this. 🙂
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Bodhirose
/ September 30, 2011Limericks are pure silliness. I’m glad you had a chuckle, Leslie! 🙂
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Sharmishtha
/ September 30, 2011cute one 🙂
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Bodhirose
/ September 30, 2011Thank you, Trisha. 😉
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S Basu
/ October 8, 2011u r most welcome
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Lafemmeroar
/ September 30, 2011Ha ha. I’ve experienced that many times …
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Bodhirose
/ September 30, 2011Me too–that’s why it jumped into my head.
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Androgoth
/ September 30, 2011Yes I like this one, it reminds me of all
those naughty offerings from… Well from
so long ago I can hardly remember, but
the chuckling is just the same 🙂 😉
Have a lovely weekend now my friend…
Androgoth Xx
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Bodhirose
/ September 30, 2011I think you put a naughty spin to everything you read! I’m glad it made you happy and gave you a chuckle. 😉
Have a good weekend too…
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Jamie Dedes
/ October 3, 2011Hey, thank you for my “good morning” laught … and I so needed it today. Blessings and hugs from your friend in CA… xoxo
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Bodhirose
/ October 3, 2011Limericks are pure silliness–fun to see how silly I can get! And make people laugh…
Hugs back to you from sunny Florida. Hey, we had our first little cool spell this weekend. Lows down into the low 60s–still in the mid 80s for the highs but the humidity is much lower. Now I know fall is out there somewhere and it’s not just a rumor! 😉
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fallenelegy
/ October 4, 2011humorous but with a message. its just vanity, i’m sure she would look beautiful, maybe even better without the extra curling work.
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Bodhirose
/ October 5, 2011Yes, some people are very vain and fall apart if one hair is out of place!
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becca givens
/ October 6, 2011De-lightful, Gayle!! I admire those who can write them … 🙂 Thank you for sharing!!
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2011Thank you, Becca. They’re still a challenge–it takes a bit of finesse to get them right. But I still enjoy trying. You’re a sweetheart!
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The Cello Strings
/ October 6, 2011amazing one, well done.
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2011Thanks so much. 🙂
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The Orange Tree
/ October 7, 2011very admirable entry.
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2011Thank you for admiring my silliness. 🙂
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Poets Rally
/ November 4, 2011funny and witty,
smiles.
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