sizzling word play
zings back and forth
playful, sexy sparks
combust our hearts
and ignites our blood
wild flowers calm
but not our ardor
a breeze gently
ruffles the petals
I accept your offered
arm and pledge steady,
soul-melding hugs
that sustain us both
The Quadrille is our prompt today and is presented by De at dVerse Poets Pub. See her presentation for all the details and join us for one of our most favorite prompts!
Arcadia Maria
/ October 24, 2016Very nice. I always like the word “ardor” but it never finds a way into my writing.
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Bodhirose
/ October 25, 2016Well, Arcadia, I suggest you write something to include that great word. I like it too! And thank you.
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whimsygizmo
/ October 24, 2016Wordplay is, by far, one of my favorite forms of foreplay. 😉 I love this, Gayle.
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Bodhirose
/ October 25, 2016Oh yes, De, you are so right about that! Thank you for providing us a great word and your generous comment for me.
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thotpurge
/ October 24, 2016Agree with whimsygizmo… word play does it!!
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Bodhirose
/ October 25, 2016It’s true…very powerful!
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kaykuala h
/ October 24, 2016pledge steady,
soul-melding hugs
that sustain us both
So nice to be with a loved one!
Hank
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Bodhirose
/ October 25, 2016It’s very nice. Thank you, Hank!
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maria
/ October 24, 2016Sizzling! I can see sparks and flares all over this piece. Well don, Gayle.
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Bodhirose
/ October 25, 2016Haha…thank you, Maria…yes there are lots of sparks and flares!
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silentlyheardonce
/ October 24, 2016The breeze gentle ruffle the leaves. It fitseems well today as our weather growing cold.
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Bodhirose
/ October 25, 2016No cold weather here yet. We had a cool down for a couple of days, Kim, but the temps are on the way back up. Hope you are doing well.
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silentlyheardonce
/ October 25, 2016Okay today. It’s supposed to drop tonight and we’re suppose to wake up in 30’s tomorrow. They’re even mentioning flurries and the it’s suppose to go back up to the 70’s one day next week. Hope you’re doing well.
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Bodhirose
/ October 25, 2016That is cold but perhaps that’s what you’re used to up there. It’s nice though when the warmish temps keep hanging around before full-fledged winter shows up. I’m doing well these days, thanks for asking! xo
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silentlyheardonce
/ October 25, 2016Yes it does drop to the 30’s but not this early. December is usually okay but still a little early for 30’s. I love cold snuggly weather. 😁
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Bodhirose
/ October 25, 2016It’s good that you love the cold…enjoy your snuggles! 🙂
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Mish
/ October 25, 2016Definitely some chemistry here….with a light and charming vibe.
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Bodhirose
/ October 25, 2016Yes, there’s some chemistry going on alright! I like the idea of light and charming too…thank you, Mish.
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
/ October 25, 2016The progression of the love from that spark through blooms to gentle warmth… (at least that is what I saw)
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Bodhirose
/ October 25, 2016I really like what you saw here, Bjorn…a sweet progression between two souls.
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rosemawrites
/ October 25, 2016this poem is sparkling and sizzling with looove! GEEZ! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Bodhirose
/ October 25, 2016Love all those hearts for me, Rosema…thank you!
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rosemawrites
/ October 25, 2016you deserve them all! ❤
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Grace
/ October 25, 2016This poem sparks but a steady pledge and arm are just as important ~ Love this Gayle ~
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Bodhirose
/ October 25, 2016I have to agree with you, Grace, and so very glad you liked this, thank you.
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whippetwisdom
/ October 25, 2016I love this, especially ‘I accept your offered arm and pledge steady, soul-melding hugs
that sustain us both’
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Bodhirose
/ October 25, 2016I like that part too, Xenia…thanks for your lovely comment.
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Victoria C. Slotto
/ October 25, 2016Lovely–I like the idea of soul-melding hugs. Hugs can be shared with anyone!
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Bodhirose
/ October 25, 2016True, hugs are a wonderful way to share affection, Victoria. I come from a family that likes to hug!
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bobellal
/ October 25, 2016Oorah!!!! That would get any man to declare “Wild Flower–I’m a wulf child howling for you!” Damn good Gayle!!!
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Bodhirose
/ October 25, 2016Oorah, my Man, it’s not everyday that I get a howl as a comment! I so appreciate that you like this…thank you!
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lynn__
/ October 26, 2016The light of your fire warms us all…love-ly write, Gayle!
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Bodhirose
/ October 26, 2016Oh, thank you, Lynn!
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Brian
/ October 26, 2016Something about wild colors run riot that fuels ardor in sunny meadows.
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Bodhirose
/ October 26, 2016Ha…I think you’re right!
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frankhubeny
/ October 26, 2016It amazes me how wordplay can create such sparks. Nice poem.
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Bodhirose
/ October 26, 2016It sure can and thank you, Frank.
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katiemiafrederick
/ October 27, 2016SMiLes..
words that
play are words
oF EmoTions
thaT
sing
petals
rose spArkinG
free to connect
in more than
one way
oF
boRinG sAMe..:)
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Bodhirose
/ October 28, 2016You are right! 🙂
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katiemiafrederick
/ October 28, 2016Enjoyed your poem..
My friEnd.. thanks
With SMiLes..:)
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Bodhirose
/ October 29, 2016I so appreciate that…thank you, Frederick.
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katiemiafrederick
/ October 29, 2016Welcome..:)
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Imelda
/ October 27, 2016definitely, wit and smarts can bring out the sparks. I like the combination of sparks and calmness here.
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Bodhirose
/ October 28, 2016Yes, it sure can…thanks, Imelda!
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Rosemary Nissen-Wade
/ November 1, 2016I enjoyed this sweet story in verse!
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Bodhirose
/ November 2, 2016Thank you, Rosemary!
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