Wild Flowers

sizzling word play
zings back and forth
playful, sexy sparks
combust our hearts
and ignites our blood
 
wild flowers calm
but not our ardor
a breeze gently
ruffles the petals
 
I accept your offered
arm and pledge steady,
soul-melding hugs
that sustain us both

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  1. Very nice. I always like the word “ardor” but it never finds a way into my writing.

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  2. Wordplay is, by far, one of my favorite forms of foreplay. 😉 I love this, Gayle.

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  3. Agree with whimsygizmo… word play does it!!

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  4. pledge steady,
    soul-melding hugs
    that sustain us both

    So nice to be with a loved one!

    Hank

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  5. Sizzling! I can see sparks and flares all over this piece. Well don, Gayle.

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  6. The breeze gentle ruffle the leaves. It fitseems well today as our weather growing cold.

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    • No cold weather here yet. We had a cool down for a couple of days, Kim, but the temps are on the way back up. Hope you are doing well.

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      • Okay today. It’s supposed to drop tonight and we’re suppose to wake up in 30’s tomorrow. They’re even mentioning flurries and the it’s suppose to go back up to the 70’s one day next week. Hope you’re doing well.

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  7. Definitely some chemistry here….with a light and charming vibe.

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  8. The progression of the love from that spark through blooms to gentle warmth… (at least that is what I saw)

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  9. this poem is sparkling and sizzling with looove! GEEZ! ❤ ❤ ❤

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  10. This poem sparks but a steady pledge and arm are just as important ~ Love this Gayle ~

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  11. I love this, especially ‘I accept your offered arm and pledge steady, soul-melding hugs
    that sustain us both’

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  12. Lovely–I like the idea of soul-melding hugs. Hugs can be shared with anyone!

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  13. bobellal

     /  October 25, 2016

    Oorah!!!! That would get any man to declare “Wild Flower–I’m a wulf child howling for you!” Damn good Gayle!!!

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  14. Oorah, my Man, it’s not everyday that I get a howl as a comment! I so appreciate that you like this…thank you!

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  15. The light of your fire warms us all…love-ly write, Gayle!

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  16. Something about wild colors run riot that fuels ardor in sunny meadows.

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  17. It amazes me how wordplay can create such sparks. Nice poem.

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  18. SMiLes..
    words that
    play are words
    oF EmoTions
    thaT
    sing
    petals
    rose spArkinG
    free to connect
    in more than
    one way
    oF
    boRinG sAMe..:)

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  19. definitely, wit and smarts can bring out the sparks. I like the combination of sparks and calmness here.

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  20. Rosemary Nissen-Wade

     /  November 1, 2016

    I enjoyed this sweet story in verse!

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