Rumpelstiltskin; a Clerihew

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Picture of Rumpelstiltskin; Bing Images

To read the fairy tale of Rumpelstiltskin, click here.

Lillian, I took up your challenge for a Rumpelstiltskin Clerihew!

You’re a cad, Rumpelstiltskin
though you offer your services to spin,
and a young girl trusts that you’re good
karma caught up with you just as it should!

Try your hand at a new form called the Clerihew over at dVerse Poets!

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  1. I like that. Well done. Lot of Rumplestiltskins out there. Need their just desserts.

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  2. Such a cad, watch out for karma

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  3. fierce and still lovely write, Bodhirose! Thank you for introducing me to a new form. 🙂

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  4. Hee hee. Too cute. 🙂

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  5. What a great choice of subjects.

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  6. good one! 🙂

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  7. I’m staying away from this form, but your cheroot is a scream!

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  8. Good for him! 😊

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  9. Oh yes!! You nailed it. Love how you rose to Lillian’s challenge. 🙂

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  10. He got his come-uppance, got his stilty skin rumpled!

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  11. Great comeuppance, also love the ability to rhyme with Rumpelstiltskin

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  12. Ohhhhh. Did not think of writing about a fictional character. I might have been a lot better at this, had I thought of that. I LOVE this.

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  13. LOL, glad karma caught up with him.

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  14. LOL so it did, caught up with him for sure! A great prompt, though I think fictional characters make more interesting Clerihews than real people. Oops did I say that? 😮

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  15. Fun. I like that you used a fictional character. I sneaked one in.

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  16. It offers a lesson that one must be reasonable or be torn apart in the ground! Great adaptation Gayle!

    Hank

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  17. That sums up the fairy tale well!

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  18. Have been enjoying your Clerihews! Well done. Sent you an email when you have time. Keep up the good posts! 🙂

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  19. Yes, he deserved what he got!

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  20. ooooh savoring my morning cup with lots of giggles this morning! SOOOO glad you did this one! Well done! Maybe we should put together a book of fractured fairy tale clerihews! 🙂 LOL

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  21. A challenging name, but you did well with it!

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