“Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing and right-doing,
there is a field. I’ll meet you there.
When the soul lies down in that grass,
the world is too full to talk about.
Ideas, language, even the phrase each other
doesn’t make any sense.”
Rumi, 13th Century Poet
Many clutch too tightly to their beliefs
of what is right and what is wrong.
It pushes them away from the community
with others and inflicts discord and chafing.
The intolerance that is born can escalate
and that discomfort can grow unhealed.
Do you not see that beliefs can expand
to embrace and allow a space for all?
Compassion gifts our soul to yield.
Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing and right-doing, there is a field.
Surrender, open, soften your ways.
There is never harm in acceptance.
Reach out and encircle your brethren.
Let the fierce grip on your beliefs fall away,
and feel your heart relax as you realize
the folly of negating how you really care.
Cultivate joy and give up willfulness
that only seeks to set up barriers.
Seek within that place that joins and where
right and wrong unite. I’ll meet you there.
The field is rife with flora and fauna,
all cohabitating in combined balance.
This microcosmic life mirrors all of
creation from the unseen particles to
the largest, all working in tandem,
cooperating in blissful silence. Cast out
disharmony and reside in the perfect peace
that the soul affirms with your every breath.
Rest in grace–all is well, have no doubt.
When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about.
It is then that you will know that there is no separation.
Nothing is ever said or done without repercussions
being felt by all. There is nothing apart from ourselves.
Ideas that we formulate and that we hold so dear are
nothing but wisps of illusions crafted out of unawareness.
Instead, let’s fashion our world out of light beginning hence.
Our truth lies in our spirit, empty of the ways of grasping
after meaningless thoughts and words that bind and trap.
Love is freedom! Let go, let go, of that which holds tense!
Ideas, language, even the phrase “each other” doesn’t make any sense.
Join us with our host Abhra at dVerse Poets for Open Link Night: http://dversepoets.com/2016/01/07/open-link-night-163/
My thanks to Bjorn who inspired me with his beautiful Glosa to give it a try.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
/ January 7, 2016Gayle this is absolutely gorgeous.. the meaning in expanding the wisdom of Rumi’s words… Glosa is like being in collaboration with the masters, and make us really listen to the words.. so many great turns in this… It’s really time to do a glosa prompt (but it does take some time to write)
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Bodhirose
/ January 7, 2016Thanks so much, Bjorn. I loved writing this and ended up writing another one too. And I love that idea of being in collaboration with the Masters. This form really does take some dedication and time to accomplish. Maybe we’ll see who’s up for the challenge some day.
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Sue Dreamwalker
/ January 7, 2016What a beautiful inspiring post Gayle.. so loved every word..
“Reach out and encircle your brethren.
Let the fierce grip on your beliefs fall away,
and feel your heart relax as you realize
the folly of negating how you really care.”
Excellent!… May we all reach out and reach into our Hearts!..
Happy 2016 and beyond Gayle.. Love Sue xx
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Bodhirose
/ January 7, 2016Thanks so very much, Sue. Your generous words mean a lot to me.
Happy 2016 Sue, I wish you the best, always and always.
Love,
Gayle xo
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Sue Dreamwalker
/ January 8, 2016❤ ❤ xxx
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Sanaa Rizvi
/ January 7, 2016Love this – so right of you to say that some of us hold on too tight to our views:
Our truth lies in our spirit, empty of the ways of grasping
after meaningless thoughts and words that bind and trap.
Wonderfully profound!!
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Bodhirose
/ January 7, 2016So very pleased you enjoyed this, Sanaa, thanks so much.
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Glenn Buttkus
/ January 7, 2016I always love Rumi, the spirit & wisdom rules. This is a heartfelt plea that will not create harmony with the dark souls, the KKK, ISIS, N. Korea, John Birchers, etc. Their hatreds are too ingrown to be excised by loving thoughts; but still I applaud your effort. I like the lines
/do you not see that beliefs can expand/to embrace & allow space (love internal rhyme) for all?/.
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Bodhirose
/ January 7, 2016I’m aware that there are many who will not be moved by my words (or Rumi’s) but I speak from my heart with sincerity…that’s the best I can do. Thanks, as always, for sharing your thoughts.
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vronlacroix
/ January 7, 2016As the universe expands, so must we. Your lesson inspired by Rumi is just right.
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Bodhirose
/ January 7, 2016I think so too, and thanks for your visit.
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Grace
/ January 7, 2016Kudoes to you for pulling off this tough and challenging form ~ This part resonated with me:
It is then that you will know that there is no separation.
Nothing is ever said or done without repercussions
being felt by all. There is nothing apart from ourselves.
I admire the wisdom of Rumi’s verses and your response on idea of community and togetherness ~
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Bodhirose
/ January 7, 2016Thanks, Grace, I admire Rumi’s wisdom too. His words were a wonderful inspiration.
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Polly
/ January 7, 2016I’ll meet you in that field…
A moving piece of work, Gayle.
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Bodhirose
/ January 7, 2016Don’t you just love that? Thanks so much, Polly.
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katiemiafrederick
/ January 7, 2016At a point in my life
i could not imagine
what it would be now
not to see beauty
in Nature for
that to be
enough
for me..
some folks
just don’t feel it
as it is not a given..
now as Love.. Beauty
is a force of emotion sadly
that not all share.. so now
even the dark among us
must be understood and
even accepted for us
to accept
it all
as is..
and do what
we can to bring
fields of dreams
a place where
where beauty
and Love
can live
for
more..
to never
find meaning
and purpose in
just living is the
farthest thing
away
from
Living
at all..
and truly most
fear and hate starts
in the unloving arms
and hearts of parents
well before age three
or any
words
at all..
the enemy most
often is gone
and that
is
Lack
of
Love
my friend..
so long ago..:)
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Bodhirose
/ January 7, 2016I think you’re right about the unloving hearts of parents. I had heard too that much damage to our young psyches happens before age three. I believe it. Thanks for your visit. 🙂
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katiemiafrederick
/ January 7, 2016Sadly yes.. My friend…:)
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ayala
/ January 7, 2016Beautiful poem!
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Bodhirose
/ January 7, 2016Thank you, Ayala! Nice to see you. 🙂
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MarinaSofia
/ January 8, 2016So agree with the sentiment behind this glosa – and the way you expanded on Rumi’s words. I like that image of clutching and straining contrasting with the flow and freedom of the field beyond.
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Bodhirose
/ January 9, 2016Thanks so much, Marina. I dug deep to try and match his wisdom. 🙂
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scotthastiepoet
/ January 8, 2016Hiya Gayle, Tenderly and beautifully rendered and you so get it… Forever an inspiration to us all, Rumi himself I’m sure would be smiling at this x
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Bodhirose
/ January 9, 2016Well I love the idea of that! Thank you very much, Scott. 🙂
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navasolanature
/ January 8, 2016This is so interesting and the wisdom of Rumi shines through you. Am just reading a book the 40 rules of love about the meeting of Rumi and Shams of Tabriz. Fiction by a Turkish woman writer Elif Shafak.
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Bodhirose
/ January 9, 2016Thank you. I find it interesting that you’re reading a book about him too. Sounds like a good book!
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kaykuala h
/ January 8, 2016Many clutch too tightly to their beliefs
of what is right and what is wrong.
It pushes them away from the community
with others and inflicts discord
Very wise words Gayle! One tends to be dogmatic without possibility of some compromise. It makes it so stiff to deal against such elements that it is often regressive. A classic glosa a difficult form and you’ve done it. Great!
Hank
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Bodhirose
/ January 11, 2016Thank you, Hank! Yes, when we become too rigid and dogmatic it can make us closed off to connecting with others. I appreciate your great comment.
Gayle ~
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totomai
/ January 8, 2016The opening stanza is gorgeous. It is sensitive.. slowly gaining momentum on the last stanza. Freedom indeed. The form seems very difficult but the flow of your words is very natural.
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Bodhirose
/ January 9, 2016Thanks for your lovely compliment, Totomai, I truly appreciate it.
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http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com
/ January 8, 2016The combination of Rumi and the glosa form combine to make an outstanding poem. Lovely.
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Bodhirose
/ January 9, 2016Thank you, Viv. I put a lot of energy into it. 🙂
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petrujviljoen
/ January 8, 2016You speak of an ideal world. An utopia. If only …
Regarding the glosa as a form to write to for a future prompt: maybe give people a month’s notice or thereabout? I’ve tried to do one and failed miserably so far.
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Bodhirose
/ January 9, 2016I doubt that we’ll actually achieve a world such as that… Yeah, I agree, maybe a month’s notice! I accomplished two of them over our break. 🙂
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Gay Reiser Cannon
/ January 8, 2016How effectively you use the form and with such a message we would wish to share with every living soul on earth. The heart of each of us must yearn for this and yet fear and prejudice turns people out of this field of peace onto the fields of war. I wish everyone could read this, process this and unify in peace. Beautiful.
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Bodhirose
/ January 9, 2016High praise coming from you, Gay, I appreciate your generous words.
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Sherry Marr
/ January 8, 2016I love this poem, every word of it, love the quote and how you wove it into the poem….there is a field….if only we would all meet each other there. One of your best, my friend.
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Bodhirose
/ January 9, 2016Thanks very much, Sherry. I love the idea of that field…
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kanzensakura
/ January 8, 2016What a wonderful quote you used and how beautifully you expanded it.
“It is then that you will know that there is no separation.
Nothing is ever said or done without repercussions
being felt by all. There is nothing apart from ourselves.”
So very true and wise. Happy New Year!
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Bodhirose
/ January 9, 2016Happy New Year, Toni! Thank you for your kind words. Hope you’re feeling better by now. xo
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kanzensakura
/ January 9, 2016Slow and steady – hot tea, soup, juice – quiet times. I really was impressed by your glosa – such a hard form and you just aced it.
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Bodhirose
/ January 9, 2016So appreciate that…thanks.
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Brendan
/ January 9, 2016I so agree that there is a field where I and Thou, me and world, one world and another, Democrat and Republican, human and animal both share, a place belonging to neither but is shared and the only place where we can learn to live together. “Each other” fades in the language of that field, but the getting there is so difficult … Well done.
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Bodhirose
/ January 9, 2016Yes, sharing…what a concept. I do love the idea of that field too. Thanks for your visit and comment.
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Victoria C. Slotto
/ January 10, 2016Gayle, there is so much wisdom in this. You chose Rumi and expanded on the beauty of his words with a lesson that so badly needs to be shared in our world today. Just savored this. And well done with the difficult form.
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Bodhirose
/ January 10, 2016I’m so glad you liked this, Victoria. Rumi’s words were such an inspiration to work with. It made the words flow out of my heart pretty easily. Thank you.
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Abhra
/ January 10, 2016Your piece has a brilliant start and a very soothing journey. Glad to see you like Rumy – ever since I read him, I have been a great fan.
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Bodhirose
/ January 10, 2016I so appreciate your compliment, Abhra, thank you…I’m a great fan of his too.
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Bryan Ens
/ January 10, 2016I like Björn’s comment on this. In addition to being collaboration, it is also conversation. Through this glosa, I’m sure you have a deeper understanding of Rumi. Nicely done.
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Bodhirose
/ January 11, 2016I agree, Bryan, conversation also. And I think I just might. Glad you liked this.
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Miss Stacy
/ January 11, 2016what beautiful and peaceful words.
felt like a meditation to read this!
i love it.
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Bodhirose
/ January 11, 2016I’m very grateful that you shared this with me. So glad you loved it…thanks.
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Anonymous
/ January 11, 2016I like it. Kind of like a “troiku”, just bigger. Very good.
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Bodhirose
/ January 11, 2016Thank you!
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Jacqueline King
/ January 17, 2016The original quote is one of my favourites, Gayle, particularly poignant in the light of an on~going family rift. I love the way that you’ve expanded it, adding your interpretation to the underlying philosophy that we are all one. 🙂
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Bodhirose
/ January 18, 2016Mine too, Jacqueline. I’m sorry to hear of your family rift. Quotes such as this one can help us put things in perspective though can’t they. And thanks so much for your visit.
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David Allen
/ January 23, 2016Beautiful!
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Bodhirose
/ January 23, 2016Thanks so much!
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Sherry Blue sky
/ January 22, 2018Inspiring and wonderful to read, especially in these times, Gayle. Just lovely, and soul-expanding.
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Bodhirose
/ January 24, 2018Thanks so much, Sherry…I appreciate your visit and gracious comment. xo
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