I sit in silence by the shore of the river.
All my years of formal education pale
in comparison to the wisdom shared
by the simple lessons offered here.
The river flows downstream, never
against herself; there is no struggle.
Though there be large boulders and
clumps of debris, she moves around
them with ease.
The riverbank supports the river,
her edges contain the waters that
rush by, sometimes a trickle, other
times raging rapids, but she remains
steadfast, ever composed and calm.
The river is alive. Her life force is
vibrant and energetic. The prana that
she emits is felt by all who approach;
they are immediately refreshed and
renewed by her golden aura.
She provides homes and haven to the
myriad fish, frogs, turtles, snakes that
rely on her for their sustenance. And too
the land animals and birds look to her for
the life-giving fluid and foods that they
fish from her bountiful waters.
They all are served with equanimity.
A current of power flows along with
her waters. It builds within itself
and bathes all who draw near with
invigorating showers of illumination.
If she ebbs or flows
it makes no difference.
She is here to give.
It is Abhra’s birthday today and he shared a beautiful poem by Rabindranath Tagore with us and asks what gift would we like to share: http://dversepoets.com/2015/10/06/poetics-what-is-your-gift/
At Sherry Blue Sky’s suggestion, I’m also linking this to Poets United for their prompt on teaching or teachers: http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/2015/10/poets-united-midweek-motif-teacher-one.html
lynn__
/ October 7, 2015I appreciate how the river flows on, never against herself; refreshes others and is here to give!
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2015I appreciate that too. A lovely example of selflessness. Thanks, Lynn!
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kanzensakura
/ October 7, 2015Sustenance, haven, power, equality – wonderful gifts to give the world. I wish the river ran for all of us. Lovely poem.
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2015The river does run for all of us…it turns no one away. 🙂 I’m glad you liked this, Toni…thanks so much.
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katiemiafrederick
/ October 7, 2015Rivers of Veins
Rivers of Land
all flow to
streams of
Ocean LiVinG
Free.. WasHinG
in and tiDinG
oUt
brinGinG
joy to
healthy
rivers..
Eternal
floW n0w..
OceaNSun..:)
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2015Ah…that sounds so nice, doesn’t it? Thanks so much, Katie. 🙂
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katiemiafrederick
/ October 8, 2015Smiles.. You are welcome..:)
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
/ October 7, 2015Amazing work thoughts, to learn from the river.. as a metaphor if nothing else.. really love the giving, the symbiosis between the river and its banks.. great work here.
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2015Thanks, Bjorn. Nature is a powerful gift and teacher.
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rythaephua
/ October 7, 2015Nice one there.
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2015Thanks so much.
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Grace
/ October 7, 2015The life force of mother earth, how we can learn much from her ~ I specially like this part:
The river is alive. Her life force is
vibrant and energetic.
Thanks for reminding us Gayle about the beauty and strength of river ~
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2015We can learn much from her I believe. Thank you, Grace, for your comment for me.
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Sherry Marr
/ October 7, 2015Gayle, this is so beautiful – the lessons of the river…..I am thinking this poem might just fit under the Midweek Motif prompt at Poets United: Teacher or Learning. Rivers have definitely taught me much about living.
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2015Well thanks for your invitation, Sherry, I linked it right in. Will comment on other’s tomorrow…getting late here.
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x
/ October 7, 2015there is much to be learned from the river for sure and from nature. to me the river is in how it flows around obstacles and how it sings as it goes
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2015I like that part too where she flows around obstacles and lets them go. Now surely we can learn from that, right? 🙂 Thanks for coming by, X.
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Sanaa Rizvi
/ October 7, 2015This is such a splendid write.. no doubt the river has much to learn from 🙂
Beautifully penned.
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2015Thank you, Sanaa, yes, I believe we can learn much from nature.
Lots of love,
Gayle
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Susan
/ October 7, 2015How lovely! The pace and flow of your poem matches its truth so well. By the second verse I had relaxed into it: “The river flows downstream, never
against herself, there is no struggle.” And I measured all my years at University against this chance to sit by the River. Thank you for putting this into words and for bringing it to Poets United.
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2015Well, I’m sure your studies did you some great good too, Susan. 🙂 Many thanks for coming by and leaving such a lovely comment.
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Abhra
/ October 7, 2015“If she ebbs or flows
it makes no difference.
She is here to give.”
Your poem is so full of life. I am glad you liked the poem I shared – and welcome to Dversepoets 🙂
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2015Thanks so much, Abhra, and I did like your poem. It seems many have come up with some nice gifts…a great prompt. And thanks too for your welcome to dVerse. 🙂
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Barbara DeVoe
/ October 7, 2015Very nice.
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2015Thank you, Barbara.
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ihatepoetry
/ October 7, 2015This was beautiful. Thank you.
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2015You’re welcome…and thank you.
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Audrey Howitt
/ October 7, 2015This is so beautiful–I am so glad that you decided to share this at Poets United today–
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2015Thank you, Audrey, I appreciate that.
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oldegg
/ October 7, 2015I can’t help but compare the benevolent impartial nature of the river compared with mankinds desire to own the water that he doesn’t even create to sell it at his whim. Sadly Mankind over all these years has learned nothing. For all that this is a beautiful poem, thank you.
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2015You’ve made a good point. But happily I was writing this from a whole different perspective…more meditative and healing than focusing on the ugliness of what mankind likes to lord over. And I appreciate your compliment, thanks so much, Oldegg.
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kaykuala h
/ October 7, 2015If only one cares to see and observe life’s lessons are everywhere. Thoughtful thoughts Gayle!
Hank
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Bodhirose
/ October 7, 2015Yes, life lessons can be observed everywhere…I so agree, Hank. Thanks for coming by.
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Sumana Roy
/ October 7, 2015river, the life line of this planet gifted ancient civilization and taught acceptance…a beautifully meditative poem….
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Bodhirose
/ October 8, 2015Thank you, Sumana, so true. 🙂
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1sojournal
/ October 8, 2015Yes, there is so much to learn from the river. So many gifts that she offers to any who draw near. This is a beautiful meditation,
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/
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Myrna Rosa
/ October 8, 2015I like the lessons you delineate so beautifully. The river is indeed a wonderful natural teacher.
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Bodhirose
/ October 8, 2015Thank you, Myrna. Yes, it is a wonderful, natural teacher. Thanks for coming by and visiting.
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yelena
/ October 8, 2015so beautifully woven and wise, Gayle, loved this.
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Bodhirose
/ October 8, 2015So very nice to have you visit, Yelena, and thank you so much.
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Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade)
/ October 9, 2015I am a river-lover– grew up by one, and am spending my final years beside another – so I greatly appreciated all you say here.
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Bodhirose
/ October 10, 2015Rosemary, you’re so fortunate to be living next to a river again. I love the water. There’s something so restorative about it. Thanks for coming by.
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Sue Dreamwalker
/ October 10, 2015Wonderfully descriptive Gayle.. Your words also flow as they meander to bring such visuals to those who follow its path..
Wishing you well Gayle.. Love and Blessings.. Have a wonderful Weekend.. Hugs Sue x
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Bodhirose
/ October 10, 2015Hi Sue…thanks so much. Bodies of water can show us much I think. I always enjoy your visits and I wish you well too with lots of love and warm hugs.
Love,
Gayle xo
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Sue Dreamwalker
/ October 11, 2015❤
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Hannah Gosselin
/ October 10, 2015Such grace a beauty in your words! This poem is a gift as well. 🙂
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Bodhirose
/ October 10, 2015I so appreciate your compliment…thank you. 🙂
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sharmishtha basu
/ October 27, 2015beautiful!
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Bodhirose
/ October 27, 2015Thank you!
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booguloo
/ November 3, 2015Beautiful too! –smile– My favorite part of the rivers are the rapids. Sitting on the larger rocks and feeling the cold water running through my toes after I walk in the mud along the banks. A truly spiritual experience.
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Bodhirose
/ November 3, 2015Thanks, Michael. You know of what I write…sounds great!
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