Wind

Wind rises in gusts
Melody clatters bamboo
Clouds race across moon

My entry for dVerse Poets Open Link Night: http://dversepoets.com/2012/01/24/open-link-night-week-28/

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  1. Perfect. This little poem just breezes through space. I love it!

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  2. I love each line alone — superb together!! \\(^o^)//

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  3. hedgewitch

     /  January 24, 2012

    I can hear it. Lovely piece.

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  4. Wonderful. Reads so well, so much so I read it aloud and “Melody clatters bamboo” is a magnificent line.

    Perfect picture choice too. Words and image complement each other very well.

    Great work here.

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  5. I echo the sentiment, lovely.

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  6. nice…you gave the wind voice as it plays among the bamboo…nice engaging verse…smiles.

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  7. I love hearing wind chimes. Something magical and spiritual about them. Lovely

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  8. i love how this paints an image of a fast forwarding movement of night and clouds moving by. beautiful!

    mine
    http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/2012/01/24/freezing-pain/

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  9. Clouds race across the moon…love it!

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  10. oh nice…love me a bit of wind…wild or soft…no matter…love the bamboo melody and the fast passing clouds..

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  11. nice… great feel to this piece… so much happening in so little words

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  12. Very vivid images here. Nice one!

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  13. Sure made the winds presence known, nicely done!

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  14. Truly lovely haiku ~ Rose

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  15. Androgoth

     /  January 25, 2012

    This a short, but very sweet offering my great friend 🙂

    Have a lovely evening now 🙂 😉

    Androgoth XXx

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  16. Isn’t it amazing to hear bamboo when it clatters???
    Your words fit the word bamboo perfectly.
    The imagery is musical.
    Hugs,
    Izzy xoxo

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  17. loved the soothing beauty of the poem. the picture you added is superb.

    love and hugs.

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