I See In You

Hands

You take my hand

I’ll take yours

Linked together

Our affection grows

I see in you

Your purest soul

A casted smile

Puts a glow inside

Your devotion for me

Affects me deep

My entry for Sunday’s 160 with Monkey Man:  http://petzoldspracticalprose.blogspot.com/

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  1. Tender and sweet.

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  2. jgavinallan

     /  June 5, 2011

    Gayle;

    YES! I love the picture…and the picture of words you paint

    hugs
    Jaye

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    • Hi Jaye, thanks a lot. This is a weekly challenge to write a poem in only 160 characters total. It’s lots of fun. : )

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  3. Lovely poem!

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  4. Such beautiful and romantic words Gayle! Love is indeed a wonderful thing isn’t it? Great poem my friend xx

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  5. having someone that will truly give that commitment and devotion…makes all the difference in life…very nicely played..

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  6. Now THAT is a great relationship. Brought to mind the warmth and tenderness of holding hands with Mrs. MM. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160….much appreciate your heartfelt creativity.

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  7. Beautifully written, it brought a smile to my face.

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  8. Just beautiful and tender and sweet. I really enjoyed it.

    Here’s mine: 160 ~ Left Behind

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  9. so beautiful, loving and tender.

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  10. This is my first visit to your site and I can feel your gift and passion for writing. I like the easy flow of your words and how you describe and bring your life to the reader much as I try to do on my own site. I only started in March of this year so am new to the Blogging arena. I will come back to see what else you are doing. Thanks!

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    • What a generous and kind comment. I really appreciate that, Renee–thank you. I consider myself pretty new myself–less than a year but I’m having lots of fun. It’s nice to meet you. : )

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