Image by mikebaird via Flickr
Unchanged
remains spirit–
joyful, unfettered, liberated,
forever free, and unchained,
deathless and limitless–
unbounded elation through delight.
Being peaceful brings awareness
~conscious~
Awareness brings peaceful being.
Delight through elation unbounded
limitless and deathless
unchained and free forever,
liberated, unfettered, joyful
spirit remains
unchanged.
My first word-unit palindrome poem and my entry for Monday Morning Writing Prompt: Circular Poetry. A palindrome can be read backward or forward. http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2011/03/28/monday-morning-writing-prompt-circular-poetry/#respond
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booguloo
/ March 28, 2011Don’t know the format name, but it’s kewl!
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Bodhirose
/ March 29, 2011I found a website called “Shadow Poetry” that has examples of different poetry forms. I’ve learned a lot from that site.
Thank you, Michael!
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Life: Between the lines
/ March 28, 2011I like the choice of unchained in relation to freedom and peace. I think that is what most of us seek. The picture choice is inspirational as well. 🙂
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Bodhirose
/ March 29, 2011I like that idea of being “unchained” too. Thanks for your comment and visit, Lynnaima. xoxo
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liv2write2day
/ March 28, 2011This has a very freeing message. Makes me want to dance like a dervish, or fly, perhaps. Thanks for participating, Gayle.
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Bodhirose
/ March 29, 2011I’m very inspired by all those teachings that tell how liberated and free our souls are–makes me feel like flying too!
Thanks, Victoria. xoxo
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eliza keating
/ March 29, 2011A great piece….not sure how I got her e..but so pleased I did …great writing..ELiza Keating
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Bodhirose
/ March 29, 2011I’m happy you found your way here too and maybe you’ll find your way back again someday. Thanks so much for your generous comment, Eliza.
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Tino11
/ March 29, 2011Brilliant.
Reading well thought out content like this, just inspires me to aspire to such heights.
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Bodhirose
/ March 29, 2011How very kind of you to be so generous. Thank you for your visit, Tino.
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ladynimue
/ March 29, 2011Gosh ! this was so so wonderful !
Message , the form , the words .. amazing job !!
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Bodhirose
/ March 29, 2011Thanks so very much, Nimue! I appreciate your kindness and nice comment for me. xoxo
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Artswebshow
/ March 29, 2011Unchained, the only way it should be.
Great poem here
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Bodhirose
/ March 29, 2011I couldn’t agree more, Richard. And thanks for your nice comment. xoxo
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trisha
/ March 29, 2011very true gayle. fabulous poem.
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Bodhirose
/ March 29, 2011Thanks so much, Trisha. Your visits and comments mean a lot to me.
Sending love your way…
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Inside the Mind of Isadora
/ March 29, 2011Very nice poem , Gayle. I enoyed it.
Namaste,
Isadora
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Bodhirose
/ March 29, 2011You’re very sweet, Isadora, thank you so much.
Namaste
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Jamie Dedes
/ March 29, 2011Clever! I like the “unchained” and then it is unchained – I read it forward and back again. It must have taken some time and patience to do this.
May your spirit be alwasy unchained, unfettered… Poem on …
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Bodhirose
/ March 29, 2011Yes, it did take some patience and lots of diddling around! Whew!
I wish the same for your spirit, Jamie–fly free!
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The Lonely Recluse
/ May 5, 2011Brilliant message, amazingly represented. The ide of a palindromic poem is such a clever thing. To write one and have the message, rhythm and clarity of yours, thats sheer genius. Loved it.
The Lonely Recluse
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Bodhirose
/ May 5, 2011Thanks so much, TLR. I’ve always been a bit fascinated with palindromes–words or phrases–so had to give this a try. I’m glad you loved it.
Gayle
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