Golden Ring

Golden ring of mine

Once conveyed a love so true

Left behind–goodbye!

Day Twelve of Haiku Challenge: http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com/

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  1. Amazing how an image can send people in such different directions.

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    • I know! We come from a place of our own experiences–very interesting to see.

      This was mine. I think some will be able to relate.

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  2. Oh that makes me sad. But it i a very lovely Haiku. I just want love to work between married people.

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    • I would like love to work between all people but it just doesn’t sometimes. But we can still take away important lessons from the experience. I sure did. xoxo

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  3. We had promise
    That had rusted out
    Freedom is in me Now*

    enjoy as well my Dearest Bodhirose(+)
    soulbro* 😉 xoxoxo—{–@

    sounds sorrowful but it is life that wishes freedom… 😉

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  4. goodbye,

    lovely put.

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  5. You capture the sadness and let down of divorce in a very sensitive manner. And life goes on..knowing you it’s a part of your growth and beauty.

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    • A happier life started for me after divorce. I learned so much about my self during this time–I cannot regret that.

      Thank you, Victoria.

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  6. Even the most perfect circle can have flaws and be broken. It is always traumatic when it is.

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  7. Sad the ring was not the band of eternity!! Surely it should not be a case of once bitten twice shy 🙂 Hope there is a hello!! at your doorstep.

    Wish you the very best!!

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    • There has been a hello at my doorstep, Nanka! I am much better off without the broken relationship. Time to let go and say goodbye…

      I so appreciate your kind wishes. xoxo

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  8. aww…hurtful! Love can hurt so deeply at times na?
    mine has a similar thot too…a painful goodbye…

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  9. nothing hurts more than that. its cruel and without any consolation.

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  10. wow!!! sad, deep, touching!!!! A ring indeed can have so many meanings and bring different emotions… 😦

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    • What a burst of emotion here, Lynnaima! A ring can have and hold so many feelings and emotions–some good–some, not so much…

      Thank you, as always for your wonderful comments.

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  11. Goodbye. Done … Sometimes that all one can do. Well poemed, Gayle.

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    • That’s right. Sometimes it’s more “humane” just to cut it off and say goodbye–wish you well, but not with me…

      Thank you, Jamie.

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  12. Sometimes they loose their “glitter”.

    Some stay and they become heavy on their hands, others that were heavy become light, and for the first time, begin to glitter.

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  13. this make me sad bodhirose.. Nice Haiku..

    Someone is Special

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