Rippling Pond

Ripples waves bee

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Pond ripples slightly

Insect meeting its demise–

Satiated fish.

 

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  1. Oh my. Can just picture it.

    You are a busy beaver today, Gayle. Delightful!

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    • I seem to work in bursts of inspiration–where several writings will happen at once. I’m going with the flow! Thanks!

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  2. Vibe in puddle
    Song so close
    Bee seeks nectar*

    enjoy my Dearest Bodhirose(+)
    soulbro* ๐Ÿ˜‰ xoxoxo—{–@

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  3. Bee reaches nectar/nirvana through one last karmic payoff–eaten by fish he’s now free. xoxo

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  4. Someone is Special

     /  February 1, 2011

    Beautiful Haiku for a wonderful image.. Nicely done and Welcome to the Haiku Challenge ! thanks for playing and have a grea day..

    Have fun! Enjoy!

    Someone is Special

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  5. what a sad beauty the pond is …

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  6. Great Haiku. I love the twist, which is perfect for a haiku. lucky fish ๐Ÿ™‚

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    • It’s kind of tricky to get those twists at the end–but I really like them too. Thanks, Katherine for your generous comment. xoxo

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  7. poor insect lucky fish and a lovely poem.

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  8. the image is mind blowing..

    lovely entry.
    ๐Ÿ™‚

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  9. Ha ha! I enjoyed this very much. It reminds me of one of my favorite haikus by Matsuo Basho (translation): The old pond, A frog jumps in, Plop!

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  10. The buzz bee was asking for trouble, and was lunch for the fish!!

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    • The bee shouldn’t have been taking a dip in the dangerous, fish-infested pond! ๐Ÿ™‚

      Thanks for your visit, Nanka.

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