Gray

Rainy Bus Ride

Colorless cold rain

melding with the gray sidewalk

misery to love.

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  1. Sorry to hear.:(

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  2. Oh, but I love it anyway. Sorry you don’t. Stay warm. …

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  3. perfect

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  4. Gayle I’m sorry to see the gloom mood on such a bright flower. The sun will be back soon for you!!

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    • Thanks for your visit, Stuart. No, not gloomy here–just a poem. The sun has been bright and cheery in spite of the too-low temperatures we’ve had lately. Today we start warming up for a few days back into the more normal 70s. Ahhhh! πŸ™‚

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  5. This really captures the feeling of December, Gayle. Great image, too.

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  6. Thanks so much, Victoria. That image does go perfectly, I think.

    We really could use some rain here–we’re under a fire watch now because of the dryness–another side effect of winter.

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  7. LOL! The last line made me smile! πŸ™‚

    The setting sun peeks
    Rays burst through clouds blushing blue
    Arcing rainbows blaze

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  8. Good! πŸ™‚

    Your poem has the exact opposite feel as mine–lovely.

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  9. Buffered clouds
    Dirty pillows
    Crying to get out*

    enjoy my Dearest Bodhirose(+)
    soulbro* πŸ™‚ xo—{–@

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  10. Exactly! πŸ™‚ Wonderful, perfect description of “gray”.

    xoxo

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  11. We had a lot of flooding up here in WA…not a pleasant sight…

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  12. this is so very kolkata rain πŸ™‚

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  13. Scent of my heart

     /  December 18, 2010

    I always relate gray with rain, misery of love with cold and wet drops .. Nice one, short, clear with meaning. Thanks for sharing!

    Wishing you a Merry Christmas!

    I want to say thank you for the support to Jingle Poetry, with you standing beside us, we are able to continue our efforts by providing the platform for poets who share and encourage…BEST wishes for the year 2011…your poetry has enlightened our community and made us smile.

    Blessings fly your way, Happy Holidays!

    http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/

    Hope to see you on Sunday Poetry Potluck again, let me know if you have questions..old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome..

    week 15 theme: reflections, interpretations, and musings.

    Stay happy! Regards to Florida!

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  14. I’m happy to share and thank you for your kind comment.

    Thanks to you and Jingle for all the good works you do on our behalf. I’m very grateful for this beautiful forum to share myself with others.

    Merry Christmas and may the New Year be filled with all good things for you!

    Gayle~ xoxo

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  15. Superb imagination…
    Colorless rain melding with gray sidewalk…
    that too a cold rain…
    πŸ™‚

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