Daffodil and Rose

The harsh, chilling freeze

Slowly warms into the spring’s

First hint of dewdrops

Left unfrozen upon the

Daffodil, poppy and rose.

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  1. So well penned my friend…:) xx

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  2. just fabulous gayle. simply awesome.

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  3. this is simply beautiful…you have a knack on poetry ..can really feel this one(+) 🙂
    soulbro*xo—{–@

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    • Your kindness means so much to me, Soulbro. I am happy you are feeling this poem. 🙂

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      • you are welcome, Love…got some brochures today for the Catskills..5 trails on it…looks like I am going back a few times on this one… 🙂 xo—{–@

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      • Yes, maybe take a couple trips or so to explore. That will be a fun trip. Even though you are a Clydesdale–you have your limits.

        xoxo 🙂

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  4. Simple and simply beautiful … I like the picture of the daffodil and rose that comes to mind. Thanks! 🙂

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  5. Such a lovely image– a lovely writ!

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  6. Jingle

     /  December 30, 2010

    very fine tuned word painting,

    elegant imagery, thanks for sharing, happy 2011.
    🙂

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  7. Thank you very much, Jingle. Happy 2011 to you! xoxo

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  8. Awesome.. One word to describe this work.. Here is mine, ! Wishes !

    Happy Rally, Wish you a very Happy New Year 2011 !

    –Someone is Special–

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  9. Thank you, SIS–so appreciate your visit and nice remark.

    Happy New Year–may it be filled with love and peace for you.

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  10. what a beautiful welcome to spring…very pretty.. 🙂 😉 Happy New Year to you

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  11. Serene and very beautiful one.. 🙂
    A very refreshing piece here.. Hugs xxx

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  12. In just a few words, you created something quite astonishing. Simple and complex, but beautiful!

    Happy New Year!

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  13. very sweet 🙂

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  14. Thanks so much–I appreciate your visit today. xoxo

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  15. what a beautiful poem on nature 🙂 loved it.

    Why The Hesitation? My Rally Week 36 Poetry

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  16. Thanks so very much, Leo.

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  17. A lovely poem…thank you for sharing.

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  18. Tis always a season of change, eh?

    Nice image… I find it lovelier to leave the image absent and allow us to see it in our mind’s eye… a thought for next time.

    Thanks.

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  19. Thanks for your comment and visit tonight. You are so right about that image. I had written it first without it and added the image later. I agree with you. Next time…

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  20. Wonderful poem …Love this one…

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  21. ladynimue

     /  January 5, 2011

    Intersting combination !
    Both beautiful flowers and the lines too 🙂

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  22. now this is what i called a miniskirt poem- welcome to the crowd haha! just kidding but i really do enjoy this! mine for this thursday- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/14/hunger/

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  23. Oh, how I long for those first spring dewdrops! Beautifully written.

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  24. lovely thank you

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  25. jgavinallan

     /  May 30, 2011

    Gayle:

    I felt like I was in your garden…beautiful aromas of nature.

    hugs

    Jaye

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